To the Bone / Alena Bruzas / Book Review

TO THE BONE

It's 1609, and Ellis has nobody. She lost her mother, lost her baby sister, lost anyone who could care about her. Her older sister has her own family and no space for Ellis. If her father's alive, he's in the New World. So that's what Ellis sets her sights on: making it across the sea. But Ellis doesn't have the money to fund her own voyage. She has to sell her services instead. Henry Collins and his young wife seem nice enough, at least.

Arriving at James Fort opens up a lot of opportunities for Ellis. Here she has a fresh start. Here she has the chance for a bright future, the type of future a poor girl like her couldn't even dream of in London. And with more than one hopeful face in James Fort, Ellis has fast friends... and maybe the chance of something more.

But tensions are running high at James Fort, both inside the fort and out. Crimes committed against the native people have left the settlers less-than-safe in their new-claimed land, and food shortages mean tempers are up within the fort walls. And the upstanding gentlemen Ellis thought she had signed on to work for has turned out to be... a little less than upstanding, without the laws and social rules from back home, leaving Ellis not quite certain she'll make it through this winter and out the other side.


TO THE BONE


THOUGHTS

Alena Bruzas dives into a particularly dark bit of colonial American history here, and I can appreciate that. The tone, however, didn't quite fit right for me.


PROS

Colonial Tragedy Colonial history is messy, and that's definitely the case here. The colonial forces, as depicted in this book, are violent. The rampant individualism--the quest for new land--leads to violent conflict, and the retaliation that comes as a result feels, well, only natural. But at the same time, for an indentured servant girl within Jamestown, the consequences are quite dire even if deserved. Bruzas balances well the threat of what we know will be genocide for the various indigenous American groups these colonists encounter with the very real threat of starvation--and the resulting desperation--that Ellis faces.

Brutal Reality The Starving Time is a brutal piece of history, even in the history books that more or less gloss over it. And Bruzas certainly does not gloss over this bit of history. Even before things get really dire within the fort walls, the reality for Ellis is... not great. She's sold herself as a servant to the Collins family in a desperate attempt to get to the New World, to maybe find her father (if he survived after they lost contact years ago), and the situation she finds herself in, without the support and structure of home, is not great. As tensions rise between the colonists and the locals, too, there are escalating murders (well deserved, for the crimes these men have committed) that Ellis bears some form of witness to. And as the long winter sets in, well, Ellis has reason to fear she won't exactly be the kind of person who makes it through to the other end.

Obsessive Hunger The gnawing hunger is palpable throughout this book. Ellis and her neighbors are starving, and their every thought, every movement, every decision is preoccupied with this hunger. As Ellis drifts throughout the day, she asks herself, can we eat horses, can we eat dogs, can we eat rats? And, of course, can we eat each other? What, exactly, is one willing to do to survive?


CONS

The biggest issue I had with this book is that the voice feels... off. Ellis reads very young, younger than she's meant to be. I think this is in part because Bruzas mimics a sort of "olden times" language in this book and imbues Ellis with a certain naivety that contributes to just how young she feels. But even in Ye Olden Days, teenagers would still sound like, well, teenagers. Or even older than that, given the responsibilities someone like Ellis would need to shoulder just to survive. Juvenile Voice

At the same time Ellis reads very young, she is also very aware of her own sexuality. Which was quite disconcerting to read. Even a contemporary teenager--a teenager who knows a bit more about what type of sexualities might exist--is still likely to wrestle with this as they start to become aware of what and who they want. Because Ellis reads so young, too, it just threw me off. It seems unlikely that Ellis would be so very aware of her attraction to her neighbor Jane in this day and age--especially with the other things that really should be on her mind. Self-Awareness

In Jamestown, they ate people. The history books say they ate people. The official mayoral records say they ate people. Recent archeological evidence says they ate people. This is just a fact. People were eaten so others might survive. At the same time... Bruzas's account feels a little bit like an overestimation. There is so much cannibalization happening in the background of this book, and it just doesn't feel like there would be so much, well, eating people. The contemporary records mark it down as something horrific, something people were pushed to do through desperation--an absolute last resort. And that's also how it is portrayed here, but that "last resort" stage is reached... pretty quickly. I don't know that it is true that everybody who survived at Jamestown ate multiple sombodies, you know? Overestimation


Rating

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
6/10

Fans of Elizabeth George Speare's The Witch of Blackbird Pond will like this fresh dive into colonial life. Those who enjoyed Mary Pope Osborne's Standing in the Light will like this new look at high-tension colonial relationships.

THE WITCH OF BLACKBIRD POND STANDING IN THE LIGHT: THE CAPTIVE DIARY OF CATHARINE CAREY LOGAN, DELAWARE VALLEY, PENNSYLVANIA, 1763

Details
Publisher: Rocky Pond Books
Date: September 10, 2024
Series: N/A
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Note: I was provided with an ARC by the publisher through Netgalley and Edelweiss+ in exchange for an honest review. All opinions here are my own.

Comments

  1. Not my preferred genres but I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  2. I am not too keen on historical fiction, and this sounds a bit dark to me. Though I understand it is based on real life events, I like to pick up lighter fare for entertainment.

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  3. Reading about what people will do when they're hungry and desperate is hard and sad.

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  4. Love the period and that it's based on true events. Great review.

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  5. This does sound like an intriguing read, though I have to admit it's probably a bit too dark for me.

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  6. This sounds like an interesting story. I really enjoyed reading your review. Thanks for sharing!

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  7. I saw this one GR just the other day... the cover immediately drew me in. Sounds good.

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  8. As a servant without any power or say I doubt she would have many chances to fall in love with her neighbor

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  9. It's hard to read about people in such desperate situations. I just recently went down a rabbit hole of reading about the Donner Party, because it happened so close to where I live now. It was a series of errors that brought them to such desperation. It doesn't ring true that Ellis would be thinking about attraction and sex in her situation, but what do I know. I guess when you feel like you're facing death those type of urges are known to come out.

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